Friday, October 06, 2006

[Haiku] - 1
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Transformation
Red cherry ice cream
in a bowl, on the table
now not cream, liquid
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The Road
Not a place to go,
forgotten destination,
amused by the journey.
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Huh?
Life is a question,
pain and tears too many,
struggle is the answer.
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Be careful while driving
Going home from work,
driving on the wet highway,
thinking in the car.
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Random
Sitting in law class,
concentration diverted,
cars honking outside.
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Tapur-Tupur
Pitter patter drops,
greener things appear to be,
flowers smile at me.
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6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Brilliant in it's simplicity; you draw sharp, clear distinctions that are to the point of contradiction; very powerful.

2:50 PM  
Blogger MISSquoted** said...

phenomenal! beautiful in its brevity...
i think i want to try writing haikus now ;-)

ur name rings a bell...sorry cant place u..
nd wud really like 2 fellow peter pan patron...
cheers!

5:15 PM  
Blogger Cobainess - ambalika said...

Hey MISSquoted! thanks for the appreciation..:).. i luv him.. Peter Pan..

Well maybe coz its a bizarre name, it rigns bells..:) I bumped onto ur site while reading blogs..:)

12:32 PM  
Blogger MISSquoted** said...

well then lets head second to the right and straight on till morning ;-)
cheers!

8:27 PM  
Blogger MISSquoted** said...

was going thru ur other posts...and finally did place u ;-)

u ma'am are my senior from school...mohun bhaiya...i remember him...
ok very un-blogger comments...but placing u in my mind made me happy...
and thats wht it is all about neway ;-)

8:33 PM  
Blogger Shrivaths said...

Interesting - very interesting

1:55 AM  

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