Waiting in the rain..
(A song)
I’m waiting in the rain,
thinking of you I’m going insane.
For how long must I wait, to see your pretty face?
‘cause it don’t feel so good,
baby just to stand here and wait.
Come back and hold my hand again,
thinking of you I’m going insane.
I see your face in the moon.
You have a promise to keep,
so come home soon.
For how long must I wait, to see your pretty face?
‘cause it don’t feel so good,
baby just to stand here and wait.
Dropped by your house today,
walked into your room.
Saw your pictures…I felt warm.
Baby without you, I’m torn,
So please wont you come home.
For how long must I wait, to see your pretty face?
‘cause it don’t feel so good,
baby just to stand here and wait,
just waiting in the rain,
waiting in the rain.
posted by Cobainess - ambalika at Thursday, July 27, 2006
12 Comments:
this is really amazing.. i like what yu've written.. i'm sure there is alot of pain n anguish behind it.. write out and let it go..
after reading ur poetry.. there is only one thought tht hits my mind -
you couldnt have expressed ur feelings bout missing tht someone special in life better than this... i mean they are so simple yet so clear... Man its a pain to love someone and keep remembering them and the times spent with them...
But Ambs just an advice to u - Dont stop writing.
Anuj
Thank u.. this is about an age old relationship.. 8th grade.. This song depicts what I felt then..
This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
sweetie ,
this is amazing , the first time i read it , i thought i would cry , the braeth went out , as the pain u felt was so similar to the one through which i have gone , the pain which everytime u even think of that person twist ur heart into agony , till it cries out for that person , a pain so great that when u see that person , there is deep pain in ur heart , which pierces thru ur very being , and u ask urself is love so painful..
but babes , there is pain which does not make u unhappy , there is pain which eventhough it lacks the intensity of fire and the depth of anow , will still care for u , love u, respect u with all its might.
so hang in there girlie,
take care
forever
Ironically its not a sad poem, at least I was not upset or anything when I wrote it. Just a song I wrote for someone I was “with” a long time ago and who left the country. Juvenile “love”. Nothing else. But I am glad you liked it. Thank you.
Great site loved it alot, will come back and visit again.
»
Please do visit.. Thank you.
Please do visit.. Thank you.
Keep up the good work. thnx!
»
its nice.........
some line are more repetative,
try to remove it..
rest is vry good..kep it up.
Its actually a song.. It has a melody so i have written it the way my guitarist/singer sings it..
But u are right.. I do tend to repeat things.. I will try to change it.. Thank you so much for your comment..
Post a Comment
<< Home