Resurrection
Tears in the rain,
Holding on to my pain.
Misunderstanding surrounding me,
Darkness is all that I can see.
To loneliness I’ve become prone,
I’m lost in a crowd, standing all alone.
Tears in the rain,
Holding on to my pain.
A beam of light I can see,
It’s here to set me free.
To relieve me of the pain in my heart,
A chance to begin again from the start.
Another level I am on,
This race I surely have won.
Tears in the rain,
Letting go of my pain.
Copyright © Ambalika Banerjee, 2006
posted by Cobainess - ambalika at Wednesday, July 12, 2006
20 Comments:
Your best one yet - but I get the feeling you're trying hard to make it rhyme; even without rhyme, it would be just as compelling, if not more
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i luv it!!!!!!!!1
Well thanks.. anonymous..appreciate it.
hey sweety, wonderful poem...never knew abt this hidden talent of urs...and i think i know abt the light in ur life tht u r talkin abt in this poem...it's actually a great strength tht's helpin us move on and be happy in our present circumstances...tc..miss ya...ash
Your poetry has too much sadness.. Hope you aren't like that in real life.. But you do write well.
Well, I'm only doing this, because you want me to. You are being disrespectful to all other people in your life who love you and care about you so much. You're holding on to two ppl and pushing urself to darkness. Ambs, pls. I mean it when I say it, I have not seen u smile, rather heard ur laughter for quite some time. You cannot fool those who truly care about u. You are upset, atleast talk to someone.. pls.. I love you, miss u too much.. U're the kinda person who makes others smile, Woman.. U cannot make others smile if you're in such a mess.. And I dont agree when you say, that you just happen to write depressed poetry, one only does, when one feels it inside. One more thing, how would you encourage your members if you are not happy?
Thank you, but by "post a comment", i did not mean post a lecture. I am fine, dont need to talk to anyone.
Hey.. Read ur Poem .. i liked it kida reminds me of sumthin i wrote recently.. :-) CHek out http://spaces.msn.com/mohit11 tc :-)
Thank you, Mohit.
amba..thats really nice.
This race u sure have won
but there are many still to be won
A web is what u have spun
let the beam change it sweets
break ur shackles and set u free.
this is battle u must fight alone
alone u loose it and you will win it alone
the journey is long but
you will grow a lot
and that is all that u can ask from god
i know, i have won just one race, but i have many more to face.. this is confusing and my life is very depressing.. I will try to live and be happy.. Thanks sankalp..
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I like it! Good job. Go on.
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Thanks a ton Mr./Ms. Anonymous!
Very pretty design! Keep up the good work. Thanks.
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crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!love it its bea-utiful
Sakshi Uberoi? Thank u so much..
greato ... miles to go before you get resurrected .... keep doing the good work ...
~ Tony
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